Cassie Lyne
English 11 A12
11/10/2009
Project 3: Proposal
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So far I feel that my paper has potential and I like the direction I am going with it. I feel more confident thats this paper has better flow, and is better put together than my last piece wich was the news story. I feel i still need to go through the whole piece, and weed out the unnessecary information because I feel my Proposal is possible too wordy. Also I want to really pay attention to my grammer and speeling because these are thing I have'nt been paying much attention to in my previous assignments. The questions I have for my readers would be to you think this proposal is easy to read, and understand? Do you find any parts not needed informations, or hard to understand and feel they should be easier explained?
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